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Your words are vagrants,
bent black and blue
by the wind -
soiled and lonely,
waiting for a beautiful man
to brush them from your face
and make them clean.

They long to find a hallway
and to intoxicate someone's lover
and play Jezebel in his arms
without understanding
what his name really means
and why his wife is dying.

They want to call him on the telephone
and ask if these scars are real
or if all sin is original,
immaculate and lacking,
like something left out overnight
that cannot find its home.

They want to hit below the belt
and leave lipstick on his collar,
a telltale slash,
and climb into a whiskey bottle  
left hiding in a suitcase -
the kind your father carried

when he left you
waiting for a promise.
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:iconidriveondriveways:
I truly love this. The last three stanzas (thats including the couplet at the end) are really striking to me.

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"I want to stand as close to the edge as I can without going over. Out on the edge you see all the kinds of things you can't see from the center." -K.V.


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:iconpassion93:
stopppppp. i have to love everything you write dude. <3

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she'll spin that spirit her own fingers with
and give him nothing (if he should not sing)

how much more than enough for both of us
darling. And if i sing you are my voice.

-ee cummings, brillopads poet.
:iconpixelwitch:
wow. :faint:

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I dream my paintings, then I paint my dreams. ~Vincent van Gogh
:iconmistraven:
very well written Brendan I love it

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~The Irony Of Life Is That, By The Time You're Old enough To Know Your Way Around, You're Not Going Anywhere Anymore ~
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:iconsuzannemoore:
really, really good. thanks for sharing this...

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"Desperation is the raw material of drastic change. Only those who can leave behind everything they have ever believed in can hope to escape.”
William S. Burroughs
:iconvillenueve:
Wonderfully written my friend,your words are powerful at describing the scenes!...I love this masterpiece!

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:iconcrunchybananas:
i absolutely love this- just your choice in language, what the poem's talking about, everything. thank you for sharing this. :)

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"Violent ends with friends that go.
I kissed a few in sticky shoes;
our cartoon show is broken."

-Animal Collective
:iconleyghan:
You constantly amaze me Brendan. Love this!

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I’m dead. I’ve missed you. Kiss … ?
- Neil Gaiman


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:iconcoyotepam:
Beautiful sweetheart. Love and Hugs...Pam:iconfloatingheartplz:

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And in the end, it's not the years in your life that count. It's the life in your years.
:iconeloise-ayre:
this is amazing.

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Act on your impulse,
Swallow the bottle,
Cut a little deeper,
Put the gun to your chest.

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