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Come, my lord,and we will make
that legendary beast -
your dark against my light
among these shadows
on the wall.
Let me soothe that livid pucker
from your doubting skin
and rend the jealous knit
of your jerkin
like a slow weave against my breasts.

Let me sweeten the wine -
honey singing in the gourd,
drowning his false words
in a stupor,
just a viper lost at duskling
that my lips can ease
into an afterthought.

You see,
this handkerchief is pure,
chaste as the light
that beats upon our names,
threatening this house;
and the envy of lesser men
weighs upon me here
like war drugged children
left dreaming in your fingers.
Another in the series...
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:iconmissgraciea:
missgraciea Featured By Owner May 1, 2011  Student
This it brilliant. :D
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner May 3, 2011  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it!
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athenaaqua Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it!
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AlexaMar Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011
Lovely!
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HourglassOfLostTime Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2010
beautiful work
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011  Professional Writer
Many thanks! I appreciate it.
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2010
Excellent, Brendan. A very eloquent Desdemona :heart:
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Professional Writer
I started this ages ago. Managed to get out the first line or twon...and then went blank. I am glad I went back to it. Thanks.
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
It would have been a loss if it had remained unfinished, Brendan.
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Yukinflake Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
SO MUCH IMAGERY... really vividly written, screams of passion, wow. Love it ^^
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks! I appreciate that.
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Yukinflake Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :)
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kindofchaos Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
Wonderful. :heart:
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it.
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VladimirHolic Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm feeling quite speechless after reading this. Good job!
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it.
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VladimirHolic Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
xD You're welcome.
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Daft-Enigma Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. Awesome
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks! One of those poems started ages ago and abandoned...
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MidoriiBlue Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful!!
As always your verse is mouth watering.
You have done a great job of capturing an older time through your language.
:love:
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it.
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:iconponddreamer:
PondDreamer Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful, and the last line is simply sublime :love:
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks very much. I wanted a very subtle reference to her demise.
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:iconponddreamer:
PondDreamer Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
You struck the perfect note then. Welcome. :)
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peridot-magelette Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010
ooooooohhhhh....
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it.
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AElfrics-Cat Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, my! This is just incredible!! The opening lines nail it completely - the desire, the tension, and Desdemona's calm deference to her husband . Love the handkerchief of closing verse; reminding us of her innocence, lost in the fall of pride.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks. I started the opening lines months ago and then just got stuck.
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:iconvocable:
Vocable Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010   Writer
Lovely piece. I think it's told from Desdemona's point of view, one of my favourite tragic figures!

I like your reference to the 'beast with two backs' in the first stanza. The recurring theme of 'light', or pure/virtuous love as I interpret it, and its relation to the handkerchief is quite nice.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks. it is tricky to decide what images to go with...I am glad you like them.
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Villenueve Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it...superb dearest Brendan!
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it.
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Rainah19 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010
Othello?
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Professional Writer
Definitely!
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Rainah19 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010
Oh, I just read the title- I was right though! :)
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DragonDew Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010
Yes, all of the above:clap:
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Professional Writer
Many, many thanks!
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DragonDew Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010
My pleasure!:heart:
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jimfleming Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010
You do The Bard proud...Extraordinary! :)
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Professional Writer
That is very kind of you. Thanks. Trying to decide on the next one...
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jimfleming Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2010
Looking forward to it :)
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KarKarKar Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010   Photographer
Wow...beautifully done.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it.
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halcyonshores Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Magnificent.. :)
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it.
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SoulSiren Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010
This is INCREDIBLE! You are a master of words, my friend.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Professional Writer
I truly appreciate that. Thanks.
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mj-magic Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
i love this series! :heart:
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks! I am not sure who to take on next...
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:iconmj-magic:
mj-magic Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
you're very welcome! :hug:

:giggle: i know you'll do an amazing job

whomever you choose! :heart:
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