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The man with the umbrella smile
and bright crooked eyes
strips down the daylight
like a hunter skinning first kill

He lurches under a darkling moon
Tucking kite string under his coat
Where the wind gathers tears and leaves
And scatters you in bits and pieces.

He has cold hands without gloves
And loves to touch you secretly
When he thinks the moon is not watching
And your lips are stitched shut
By a mother’s weary hands.

His sighs are solitary shades
Growing in a damp knot
Under the stretch of your dress
Where he baits your breath
And forces you to hold it
Until you turn blue.

He offers you pieces of stars
And pretty things to wear
Places promises on your tongue
That hang like cloaks in dark closets
And presses you to keep secrets
Arched between your thighs
Tucked up inside your belly.

He unpins night from the sky
And rolls it up under your bed
Tucking it in safe and secure
In the corners he hides from your family
Disguising the abomination
That calls itself sanctuary.
©2008-2009 =Scarlettletters
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Author's Comments

The thief of innocence is the worst....

Daily Deviation

Given 2008-12-22

Thief by =Scarlettletters, has that certain magic. As the suggester noted it: 'is written with such a profound sincerity. The images he evokes are so real and life-like that they continually send me into a cataclysm of emotions. He deals with a subject that is so raw and heart wrenching but makes it bearable while retaining the darkness of the subject.' (Suggested by *IrrevocableFate and Featured by ^LadyLincoln)

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:iconmithgariel:
I love the way your mind wonders and how it all comes together.
Wording. Dig it.

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:iconvintage-muse:
My opinion on this was given long ago but this is still a mixture of beauty in the words used and an uncomfortableness in the topic discussed that makes this piece unbelievably good.

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:iconvintage-muse:
and I will continue to say why you have never been recommended for a DD is beyond me. Very little impresses me and my bias isn't so blinded that I can't see your talent for what it is.

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Potential is a teasing lover who always eludes the most persistent of admirers.
:iconterribletreasure:
Oh my, haunting and beyond beautiful. The imagery is so... scarlet letter-ish. Yes you've created your own adjective with your brilliance.

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:iconbutterfly1991:
This is very haunting indeed, and as Terrible Treasure has said, beautiful.

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:icondrusila333:
:no: There is nothing worse imo. If someone can't fathom what the loss of innocence does and how vile it is they would have a very good picture of it by reading this poem. Very well expressed.

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Why is it considered necessary to nail down the lid of a coffin?
:iconsilverstride:
I second that. O____O

See, now, if I could figure out HOW...
Yeah...xD

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Amazing.

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:iconvillenueve:
A superb work again my dear Brendan!,this is a really depictive piece,I loved your words!

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