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Literature by WaywardGypsy




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Something against the sky -
a kestrel wing
or kite
drifting godward -
the circle of sound
dents the morning
and turns my ears
into giants,
second guessing the weight of
air
and how your breath
measures the morning light.
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MissSapphire Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Its beautiful, :) I love the flow of it and the last 2 lines are lovely! :)
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MrWootton Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Professional Writer
"drifting godward" - great line
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks!
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Olaf68 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012   Traditional Artist
beautiful
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it.
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Olaf68 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012   Traditional Artist
you're welcome
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halcyonshores Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I am sure I've said it before, but even the Sirens, your words would seduce.
Amazing work, Brendan.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Professional Writer
That is very high praise. Thanks very much!
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halcyonshores Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The simple truth *smiles*. You are most welcome. :rose:
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PondDreamer Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful as always. :love:
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