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The white cotton of a summer day
streams across June
like paint peeling off porch railings
buttercups go drowsy in window boxes
watching the world nod and doze
and the burr of cicada wings
rubs the still air scorched
and scars the sky
like locusts on honey
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Annapurani Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2009
magical...i'm there on that lazy june day...

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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2009  Professional Writer
I have been having quite a few lately... Thanks.
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PaperDreamerArt Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2009
In just a few words you have wonderfully expressed so much!
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2009  Professional Writer
Thanks! I think short poems is my lot in life...
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PaperDreamerArt Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2009
You're welcome :)

Short is good when it expresses all you wanted to convey.
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Lindzgal Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2009   Writer
You really are a great writer! This entire poem reminds me of summer days and youve captured every little detail..."the paint peeling"...i love to read your poetry.
thank you, this one made me smile
Linda
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2009  Professional Writer
Thanks - I am glad you enjoyed it and it made you smile!
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leyghan Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful. You've got me thinking about lying in a hammock in the shade of my backyard, sipping on ice tea. Or eating watermelon and spitting the seeds as sweat trickles between my shoulder blades. Mmm watermelon. Sorry what was I saying...
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2009  Professional Writer
Can I join you?
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PaintedOnMySoul Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2009
Your wonderful work has been featured here::pointr: Kat's Sunday Feature :cuddle:
:heart:Kat
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