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She would break his heart
in ways he knew
he could grow to love -

how she spoke his name
like smoke,
drawing it out
in cool blue syllables
between her teeth,
her mouth talking that sweet trash
he coveted like new coin.

the red spike heels
he could feel crack his spine
and the slit of her eyes
stripping his muscles and tendons
down to tender shoots
crushed against her chest -
her bones on his,

the sound of being played.
My thanks to :iconmdreamer: for the picture. Please check out the full shot: [link]
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:iconperidot-magelette:
peridot-magelette Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
it is superb, and the last line is the cherry on top.

p.s. those heels are freakin' gorgeous!
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
Such delicious suffering ;)
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010  Professional Writer
*Chuckles* Thanks.
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:iconc0nfessi0ns:
C0nfessi0ns Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
featured [link] :aww:
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks very much. I appreciate it!
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:iconplumnutz:
PlumNutz Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Hobbyist
Peter Kater - Water Ballet

Good song for this.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2010  Professional Writer
Many thanks. i appreciate it.
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:iconplumnutz:
PlumNutz Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010  Hobbyist
You're quite welcome.
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HourglassOfLostTime Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010
Subtle & yet ravishing 1_~
I favor the second stanza
Very well done.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks. It is an experience we have all had (or are going to at some point!)
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