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I think I lost us
in a glass of scotch -
softly drowning,
going down like
every mad man
I ever envied.
Why did I believe
your lips tasted
so good,
sweet and heathen
like the heather
I laid you in
that last night
I came home?
I had a thing
for damaged women,
and you could drink
your mother's last words
in everything
we wasted.
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MrWootton Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Professional Writer
I had such a thing
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ClaudiaCasanova Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011
every word left me hanging
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Professional Writer
I am very glad you like it - many thanks!
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leyghan Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Instantly evokes a scene, a place in time. Your language as always, is rich and satisfying. :heart:
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it!
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Ferelwing Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Nicely done, very well written!
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it!
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:iconferelwing:
Ferelwing Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
:hug: You're welcome hon!
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neuroticmnemonic Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011   Writer
This reads wonderfully. Brilliant!
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it!
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