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Your slouch says it all
and the way
you wear your hat
in your hands
like something condemned
or a color
you cannot remember.
Words
cannot chase you here
or follow
in the footsteps
of people
whose faces vanish
like sad lies
and pictures
torn from wallets;
and sounds
will not echo
or move
through your sleep
of tears
in blind comfort,
or a song
that bleeds your name
across the pillows
and leaves you falling
like dreams
that slipped through winter...
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Prompt - lost

Dedicated to everyone who is....

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:iconcsnyder:
many ways to express ones self, you do it wonderfully with your words
:iconpridescrossing:
Excellent work!

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"I carry your heart with me (I carry it in my heart)."
-e.e. cummings :heart: :) :peace: :butterflytwo:

I now have a few photos for stock use located at *gild-a-stock please check out her stock!!!:)
I also put images in my scraps that can be used
:icongirlofgreys:
I think i'm in love and i fell lost all the time.

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~Love is like a photograph...they both develop in darkness.~
:iconpixelwitch:
wonderful!

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I dream my paintings, then I paint my dreams. ~Vincent van Gogh
:icondtee-sawk:
Lovely imagery man, I like: "color you cant remember".
I have a sort of practical mind and you lose me after "wallets". advanced explanation encouraged? :)

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Those who say something is impossible should not interrupt the person doing it
:iconhedda16:
I am definitely lost...:sniff:
:iconwriterofsorrows:
Beautiful, love the imagery.

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You Know Nothing Of The Hidden Dangers That Lurk In The Forbidden Curtain Of Night.
:iconnarenohate:
TT^TT I love it!

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:iconcrimson-delight:
As this is the third time I've favourited a poem of yours, I daresay, I'm a fan...love your work! :)
:iconvillenueve:
I love your poems my friend,this is a masterpiece!...Great work dearest Brendan! :clap:

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