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I wanted to dress her
in cool, sky blue lapis
so she would remember my eyes
and ivory so fragile
that the thin air would break,
and gold sashes to circle her thighs.
I wanted to bring her
cool orange blossom water
to feed her dates sugared in wine,
and figs ripe with honey
that sweetened her fingers
and fresh berries that burst on the vine.
I wanted to teach her
the language of lovers
in words that would capture her soul,
with lush crimson notes
and filigree silver
with a heart grown brazen and bold.
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:iconcsnyder:
splendid, really lovely
:iconkatrinzzz:
aaahhh so beautiful :heart:
The imagery is wonderful! I could feel images and scenes forming in my head while I read this ^^

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I saw the horizon. It's out there. And though I may not ever be able to touch it, it's worth reaching for.
~At First Sight
:iconredsky-atnight:
Oh how wonderful, this is the style I really enjoy reading, thankyou! Envious of your descriptive power :aww:!

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"'Unmask!'
(-the Red Death held sway over all)
"
:icondrusila333:
This piece bursts with flavors and sights :D Beautifully penned! :heart:

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If you try to fail, and succeed, which have you done?

Why is it considered necessary to nail down the lid of a coffin?
:icongoo-goo-ga-joob:


oh my god. sensory overload.
in a good way.

:peace:


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oh capitan, my capitan
:iconblueskye27:
Beautiful, lush poem. It just seems a bit unfinished to me. You say "I wanted," but did you? It may need a couple more lines...
:iconsingovermyradio:
I love the imagery and colors!

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Art is the objectification of feeling. -Herman Melville

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:iconvintage-muse:
Thank you. *smiles* You're enjoying this far too much. *chuckles*

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Karma would like to say that those who think she's a bitch are usually those who are getting kicked hardest in the ass.
:iconrustymermaid:
Really beautiful...reminds me of some old Arabian poems

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Having abandoned the search for truth.........I am now looking for a good Fantasy.
:iconsenza-amore:
truly gorgeous. I like how well you capture sight and taste :)

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Feel free to let me know if this next part gets a bit too personal. I've been told I have boundary issues.

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