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Lovers are like landscapes -
fields of wheat,
a crowning glory
cascading down a bare back
as if to beckon me closer
to touch;
rolling sand
like tapered limbs
that bend gently
and hug the dark wet
underneath;
the hushed breath
of jungle  -
a canopy ripe
and bursting overhead;
and the beautiful surround
of rugged peaks
thrusting through the soil,
knowing which direction
to move in.
For Victoria
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someperson716 Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
so beautiful *just like th landscapes =) lovely & romantic :heart:
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Professional Writer
I appreciate that very much - thanks!
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peridot-magelette Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
oh my.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Professional Writer
*Smiles*
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
A lovely piece. Wonderful job.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks! I am very glad you like it.
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
You're welcome. :aww:
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hakkaobake Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha i know a Victoria I think would like this. but in all seriousness I like it.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Professional Writer
*Grins* As do I!! Thanks.
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MariaTala Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
oh I feel the same way all the time I can't help it since the view from my window are mountains. I love the sweetness in your words.:heart:
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Professional Writer
I also think lovers are like paintings...
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RakloRay Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Professional Writer
Good ! Good ! Best !
RR
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it.
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RakloRay Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Professional Writer
My pleasure
RR
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archelyxs Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
Fluid and beautiful.
You have a certain skill, you know. :heart:
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Eefera Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012


Lovers are like landscapes -
fields of wheat

Immediately I was reminded of soft rolling farmland, which is a very romantic image. This is a very lovely piece.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much. I appreciate it!
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Laralluna Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Student Writer
Nice sensual imagery. Love it. :rose: :peace:
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much. I appreciate it!
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Laralluna Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Student Writer
Welcome! :)
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SoulSiren Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012
took my breath away.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much. I appreciate it!
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Kelsendiperous Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Student Writer
Lovely, as usual. :)
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it!
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LeoDC2 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Simply beautiful. Good Job.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it!
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ElegantFaith Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012   Writer
This is beautiful. :)
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it!
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Villenueve Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Enchanting words my dearest Brendan!
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it!
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RavenSpider Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
that's very pretty
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it!
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j0rosa Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
sweet, deep words :love:
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it!
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SarahMarieWilliamson Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Student Writer
this is really awsome-I think my favorite of yours
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks! I am very glad you like it.
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SarahMarieWilliamson Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Student Writer
mhm! o by the way, out of curiousity, which do you consider my best out of all my poems you have read?
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WaywardGypsy Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
wow good shot Brendan!
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks. I wanted a few more images image as well, but the poem said it was done!
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LavenderMystt Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
Wonderful! Your words never fail to move me.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks! I had not done a romantic one in quite a long time.
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LavenderMystt Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012
Why not? You are so good at it. Life tends to interfere with romance if you let it.
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bshuffett Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
This piece was on the home page. I logged in for the first time in months just to add this to my favorites.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Professional Writer
That is very nice of you to both do and say. Thanks very much!
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rlkirkland Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nice one. :)
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks! It's that time of year.
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iliumleather Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
nice work
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it!
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iliumleather Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
any time, i love seeing your work in my messages.
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