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I watch your kite disappearing -
slowly slipping through your fingers
like a defiant act of love.
The laurel wreaths I crowned you with -
sweet Adonis to a maid,
shivering on your cool, wet skin.
I said that I could set you free
but you never would believe me.
slowly slipping through your fingers
like a defiant act of love.
The laurel wreaths I crowned you with -
sweet Adonis to a maid,
shivering on your cool, wet skin.
I said that I could set you free
but you never would believe me.
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December Form Challenge, 2012
The Indriso is an Italian form that is similar to the sonnet except its structure
features two 3 line stanzas (terzains) and two 1 line stanzas. It is meant to
have a melodic flow like a song and combine this with the punchy one line
statements.
Wordsmiths Literature Site: [link]
Artsmith Magazine: [link]
This Disturbing Magic: [link]
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The Indriso is an Italian form that is similar to the sonnet except its structure
features two 3 line stanzas (terzains) and two 1 line stanzas. It is meant to
have a melodic flow like a song and combine this with the punchy one line
statements.
Wordsmiths Literature Site: [link]
Artsmith Magazine: [link]
This Disturbing Magic: [link]
Facebook [link]
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