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Oh,
but I am going to regret you
in the morning
and the way
you made
my skin feel
too real for living.
I went at you
with hands too clean
for this world
and a heart
full of dirty days
and violated your wings
and coveted
the lump in your throat.
You
brought me something
eternal
as precious
as a new name
that I almost recognized

as hope....
...
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010
sometimes the collision of strangers can generate sparks of truth.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2010  Professional Writer
Many thanks! I appreciate that!
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ringetteblondie Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010
it just...speaks to me. nothing more to say...its incredible
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks! And i am very glad it does.
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artifice-child Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010
the ... at the end almost weakens it a bit, for me.

but as always, your simpler pieces really ring home in my head.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks. Endings are always a huge pain in the butt for me.
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sugarspicevodkanice Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010
wonderfully done..i can only hope to write as well as you some day..
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks very much. I appreciate it!
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Dulchis Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2010
bravo!
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010  Professional Writer
Many thanks.
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