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The warm edge of just beginning
beckons like a newly threaded loom,
taut with possibility -
the threads a tangled coat
of many colors.
There is such unforgivable seduction
in the unknown -
all you can taste
is riddles;
and the shock
of unraveling secrets
reverberates on your tongue
like the low rumble of summer.
Mystery is a pillow
you place your head upon
and beg for happily ever after.
And in the corner of your eye
she sits -
the rich India ink
of her words teasing your anticipation.
If she offered herself up,
skin peeled back
to reveal the raw beauty of flaws,
would you even guess
at the bright wealth she weaves?
For she holds your heart
with the stitches of silver needles
and silken tendrils
that ensnare your efforts
to understand.
©2008-2009 =Scarlettletters
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:iconvillesraven:
Beautiful as always Brendan. You truly have a gift.

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"Suppose someone came to you and said you can be attractive, brilliant, wealthy, fascinating, and you can live forever. Would you turn it down?"
---Meg Reed Thompson
:iconpearl-dust:
words flow effortlssly.... comapssionate and very human... beautiful piece
:iconsilentplea:
lovely, descriptive words :heart:

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~Shelley

What lies behind us
And what lies before us
Are small matters compared to
what lies within us

~Ralph Waldo Emerson~
:iconvillenueve:
Excellent work my dear friend!...I loved every word you said,it is so beautiful!

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Literotica

My stock-

:iconmcroverdosexoxo:
oh WOWOWOOWOWOW!!
this truly amazing. its has the effect of silk.. it just flows so DAMNN well!
:love: :hug: :=D:

keep rockingg. ur soo talented

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If I could dream at all, it would be about you. And I’m not ashamed of it.
Edward Cullen, Twilight, Chapter 14, p.294
:iconfallenidle:
...ensnare your efforts to understand

What a delicious and gloriously terrifying promise.

--
If she has to tell the story,
She tells it slowly

- ~AnUrbanNomad, "And They Didn't Sleep..."
:iconatbarnett:
I love the way your words dance with each other...

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I am here to live out loud. - Emile Zola
:iconsilverstride:
Such powerful words for such a powerful concept.

My friend, you truly have a gift. @.@ Bravo at such beauty.

--
Sabrina: FEED THE PENGUIN, BE THE PENGUIN. -serious look-
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I am Ellen Hopkins in dA's Celebrities Crew!
:iconerouge:
Victoria must mean something very dear to you :P Keep up the excellent work.
:iconponddreamer:
Lovely, and subtly haunting. Wonderful work. :rose:

--
Shamelessly proud mother of =Mr-Ie

"There are two tragedies in life.
One is not to get your hearts desire.
The other is to get it."

George Bernard Shaw

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