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The warm edge of just beginning
beckons like a newly threaded loom,
taut with possibility -
the threads a tangled coat
of many colors.
There is such unforgivable seduction
in the unknown -
all you can taste
is riddles;
and the shock
of unraveling secrets
reverberates on your tongue
like the low rumble of summer.
Mystery is a pillow
you place your head upon
and beg for happily ever after.
And in the corner of your eye
she sits -
the rich India ink
of her words teasing your anticipation.
If she offered herself up,
skin peeled back
to reveal the raw beauty of flaws,
would you even guess
at the bright wealth she weaves?
For she holds your heart
with the stitches of silver needles
and silken tendrils
that ensnare your efforts
to understand.
For Victoria
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colt51 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010  Professional Writer
Many thanks, my friend!
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HourglassOfLostTime Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2009
gorgeous work
I especially favor the ending part.
Such beautiful words.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2010  Professional Writer
That means a lot. Thanks so much.
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EternalSolaceEssence Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is classic-- just flows and reads so well...you have a magical sense of wording and captivating imagery, making the most beautiful poems.
i envy and bow to your talent. :clap:
lovely. :heart:
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2009  Professional Writer
Thanks very much! I appreciate the support greatly.
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EternalSolaceEssence Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're welcome.
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RainbowEyedGypsy Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009
beautiful words!
...the raw beauty of flaws...
if only everyone could see that.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2009  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it!
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Oyoko Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree with every comment I've read thus far.

incredible. unstoppable.

thank you again for another stimulating piece.
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