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I wandered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o'er vales and hills,
When all at once I saw a crowd,
A host, of golden daffodils.

A solitary path I claimed
In seeking shelter from the crowd;
And lo, when all deserted me,
I wandered lonely as a cloud

I sought the green and grassy knolls
Between the rustic barns and mills,
And spied the new winged, dappled lark
That floats on high o'er vales and hills,

The silent majesty of thoughts
Was broken as I dreamed aloud.
I was wrested from my reverie
When all at once I saw a crowd

This treasure grows and rests upon
the fertile soil where river spills
I'll rest my weary bones within
A host of golden daffodils.
December Form Challenge, 2012 :iconkiwi-damnation::iconprojectdfc:


Glosa

The Glosa was used by poets of the Spanish court and dates back to the late 14th and early 15th century. For some reason, it has not been particularly popular in English. A search of the Internet l uncovered a meager number of brief references to the form. From the limited information it is learned that the traditional structure has two parts. The first part is called the texte or cabeza. It consists of the first few lines (usually four) or the first stanza (usually a quatrain) from a well-known poem or poet. It has become permissible to use lines from a less well-known poet, or even from ones own verse.

The second part is the glose or glosa proper. This is a “gloss on,” an expansion, interpretation or explanation of the texte. The formal rule describes the glosa as consisting of four ten-line stanzas, with the consecutive lines of the texte being used as the tenth line (called the glossing) of each stanza. Furthermore, lines six and nine must rhyme with the borrowed tenth. Internal features such as length of lines, meter and rhyme are at the discretion of the poet. Examples of this will be found in this chapbook collection.

As with most poetic forms, unless dictated by strict contest requirements, poets have taken the liberty to vary the format. In addition to the glosa’s traditional ten-line stanzas, one will find 4-, 5- and 8-liners.

I used the first four lines of "I wandered lonely as a cloud " by William Wordsworth.

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Perliquin Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
beautiful, makes me want to grow acres of daffodils and run through them
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it!
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Villenueve Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Magnificent work dearest!
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks. I appreciate it very much!
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SweediesArt Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Professional Writer
Many thanks!
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SweediesArt Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome:heart::hug:
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TheDorsai Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Somehow I missed this one. I've been checking too - I really wanted to see what you did for your glosa. What did you feel about this poetic form?
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks - I appreciate it! I like it. I would like to try my hand at a truly traditional one.
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TheDorsai Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, you had said you were going to reference mine so I got excited.
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bewilderedconfused Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it!!! :clap:
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate that.
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bewilderedconfused Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome!
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Shades-Of-Lethe Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wonderful!! :heart:
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate that.
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hairyskeleton Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm more interested in the photograph
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j0rosa Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
:love:
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate that.
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rlkirkland Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're the first i've seen use this form since I posted 'Faun Haven' nearly two years ago.
A Glosa on Poe's 'Fairy Land' :heart:
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Professional Writer
I would love to read it. I would like to do the traditional form some time...
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Skullkid43 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
Beautiful:DYour skill is very admirable!
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate that.
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Skullkid43 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
Your welcome.
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Bemari Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
Beautiful poem. :)
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate that.
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WaywardGypsy Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I recognized the Wordsworth... nice Glosa!
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks! I started with "I think that I shall never see", but it went nowhere...very fast!
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WaywardGypsy Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It turned out well!
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Philluppus Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012   General Artist
fantastic really,
love to read the info too,

a page with a joy to read :D
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks - I enjoyed writing this one.
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ExterminatorHydrogen Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, you're a really skilled poet! :D
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Professional Writer
That is very nice of you - thanks!
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