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My reluctant brother -
grey suited hair
and that scar
beating on your lip
like an unfortunate rhyme -
long have I thought of you.
Your pockets are shallow wastrels
and in the crisp folds
of your trousers,
I find that time
is a leper -
an ill-fated star
that pocks this dream witted night
and turns my tears
to sober music.
For I have found your hopes
a hollow thing -
your promises a cold frost
for my supper
and all your pretty words
the still birth of my misfortune.
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
A potent evocation, Brendan.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Professional Writer
There are things we wish we could say... Thanks.
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
My pleasure, Brendan.
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Daft-Enigma Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Had to read this one outside, it was absolutely lovely.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Professional Writer
Thanks. Family ties are complicated at best...
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Daft-Enigma Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
out loud, not 'outside' dunno why I said that...
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CrimzonRose Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011   Writer
Unfortunately, you speak my mind with this piece. I know it these thoughts well, but you have said them so much more eloquently than I could have done. Amazing...
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011  Professional Writer
Thanks! it is odd how people who are nothing alike can be of the closest bond.
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neuroticmnemonic Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011   Writer
This is fantastic.

"I find that time
is a leper -
an ill-fated star
that pocks this dream witted night
and turns my tears
to sober music." ---> Absolutely brilliant.
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Scarlettletters Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Professional Writer
Thanks very much - I appreciate it!
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